“Because poetry is about feelings, many honest-sycophants try to spare them with sweet veritable tongues.”
Tell me, give me your honest critique, sense most never do; what do you think of these poems, be brutal.
She said, “your work is rigid, it’s coarse and lacks flexibility; you need more fluidity…yes that!”
Thank you for describing my life…that’s the point, isn’t it?!
I hope I didn’t offend you, she said.
You’ve confirmed me, thank you!